Sunday, February 2, 2014

White Sands

Here is a short story I wrote that takes place in New Mexico.  I don't know about you, but I love that state.  Enjoy.


                                                                 State Highway 70

 White Sands National Monument

July

 
Rafe Fernandez of the New Mexico State Police walked carefully around the corpse.  Like the others before her, this woman was laid out on her back.  Her head was to the north, her feet to the south.  Her arms pointed directly east and west.  The autopsy would find the cause of death to be strangulation by the red ribbon tied tightly around her neck.  A kachina rested face up on her breastbone – an Apache Crown Dancer.

Like the others, she was young, appearing to be in her 20s, red-haired, and pretty.  Rafe sighed.  This killer followed the same pattern with each murder.

“Lieutenant, are you through with the crime scene?”  Eddie Wilson with the FDMI waited beside the body.

“Yeah, go ahead,” said Rafe.  “It doesn’t look like there’s anything different with this one.”

“How many is it now?”

“She’s number eleven.”  He shook his head.  “There is never any forensic evidence, no fibers or foreign DNA on the body.”  He looked around the area.  “And they’ve all been laid out the same way in a busy area.  Any tracks he left are either covered by the shifting sand or all mixed in with those of the tourists.”

“I wonder what this guy has against red heads?”  Eddie carefully set out a body bag.

“I’ll ask him when I find him.”  Rafe walked back to his car.  He would have a long report to compile.  After eleven months of these murders, he knew the drill.

August

The sunset turned the road to fire reflected off the gypsum sand as she drove west, headed back to Las Cruces in the gathering twilight.  Sarah pulled down her visor and squinted to see the highway ahead.  “What the hell is that?Something loomed in front of her speeding car.  She slowed the car, only to slam on the brakes when she realized a huge shape blocked her path. 

‘Omigod, I’m going to hit him!”  The car stopped three feet from the figure.  Sarah put her hand to her chest and breathed deeply to slow her heartbeat from stampede mode.

            The man, if that’s what it was, did not move.  Sarah watched him.  “What is he doing out here, dressed like that?”  She looked around and could see no other vehicles.  The figure before her stood in the regalia of an Apache Crown Dancer, complete with a black hood which obliterated his face.  This close, he wasn’t above average height.  The white-painted headdress he wore added a couple of feet to his stature.

“What do you think you’re doing, scaring me like that?  I ought to…”  Sarah shut her mouth with a pop.  The figure moved inexorably to her driver’s side window.  She put the window up all the way and locked the door, frightened by his intense deliberate movement.  He stalked her like a wild predator.  She glanced quickly at her surroundings.  It grew darker, with no one else in sight in the desolate country.

He stood beside her door and brandished a tire iron in an arc toward her window. 

Sarah did not hesitate.  She pushed the accelerator to the floor and took off with tires that squealed in protest at their treatment.  In the rear view mirror, she could see the man spin and regain his footing.  He focused his attention on her as she sped away to safety. 

She didn’t slow down until she reached Las Cruces.  Back in civilization, she walked gratefully into the well-lit hotel.  Sarah nodded to the young woman behind the front desk and hurried to her room.  Once inside, she locked the door, turned the deadbolt, and flipped the safety bar for good measure.

She tossed her notebook and purse on the bed.  The man hadn’t followed her that she could see.  But some instinct told her he would not give up.  She knew the next time she would not escape him.  Safely in her room, her skin twitched with anxiety, as if hungry desert ants crawled all over her body.  She crept to the window and peered out from behind the curtains.  The parking lot appeared harmless, normal.  There was no one out there, no sign of an Apache Crown Dancer.

Sarah remained in her room all night, did not call for room service.  Better to be safe, even if her stomach angrily growled.  She wedged a chair under the doorknob.  The blaring television kept her company during her fitful sleep.

In the morning, the sunlight helped her regain her natural confidence.  “I was worn out last night.  That’s why I overreacted.”  The man’s car probably broke down. 

He wanted a ride back to town, that’s all.  There was so little traffic on that road at that time of day.  No wonder he was insistent.  “Poor guy, I hope he found a ride.

Part of her treacherous mind reminded her that there were no other vehicles in sight along the route.  Stranded motorists would not wield a tire iron. 

“Shut up and forget it!”  Sarah admonished her image in the mirror.  She dressed quickly, anxious to get out, eat a good breakfast, finish her interviews in town today, and leave Las Cruces in the dust behind her.

Sarah glanced around the room to make sure she had everything she needed for the interviews.  Satisfied, she opened the door.  Something rested on the patterned carpet in front of her door.  It was a carved figure about a foot tall.

Sarah trembled as she picked it up.  It was a kachina doll, an Apache Crown Dancer.  The black hooded head mocked her with its soulless slits for eyes.  She gulped down her scream.  “He found me!” 

Her quaking knees gave way and she sank to the floor.  She could not withhold her screams any longer.  Once started, she could not stop.

* * *

“Miss Quinlan?  I’m Lieutenant Rafael Fernandez of the New Mexico State Police.”  He showed her his badge, his dark eyes looked concerned.  “Do you feel up to telling me about what happened?”

She nodded and sipped the bottled water the hotel manager had given her.  “I don’t know where to start.”  She looked up at him.  “I’m afraid you won’t believe me.”

He pulled up a chair and sat facing her.  “Why don’t you tell me about it?” 

He did not interrupt her until she finished.

“You only saw the man on Highway 70, is that right?’

“Yes.  I was alone on the road, no other cars.  It was a couple of miles past the park entrance.  He just appeared in the distance.”

“What were you doing out there?”

“I went to Alamogordo to interview Aaron Sorenson.  His father was one of the physicists on the original atom bomb project at Los Alamos.”

“Yes, I know Mr. Sorenson,” said Rafe.  “He’s lived out there most of his life.  Why did you want to see him?”

Sarah shrugged.  “I’m a writer.  I’m working on a story about the history of nuclear research in New Mexico.  If the story sells, it could turn into a series.”  She looked at him with a wobbly smile.  “I thought it would be so easy, just interview the family members and get the true story.”

She looked away.  “I didn’t count on getting the fright of my life.”  Still shaking, she tried to stand.  Her legs didn’t hold her and she sat down hard on the chair.

“Miss Quinlan, please slow down.  You’re not ready to get up yet.  We’ve got a lot to talk about.”

“But I didn’t see anything really.  I can’t identify him.  Please, I just want to get out of here.”  Sarah grabbed the arm of the chair and stood.  “There, you see?  I’m fine.  I’ve got other interviews scheduled today.”

He stood and towered over her.  “I can’t let you leave.  It isn’t safe.  Besides, as a material witness we can hold you against your will.”

Sarah started for the door.  “But you can’t do that.  I don’t know more than what I’ve told you.  I want to leave now.” 

“Miss Quinlan,” he said, taking her arm.  “I’ve seen eleven other kachina dolls like this one.” 

He looked directly into her eyes.  “Each one of the dolls was on the body of a murdered woman found out at White Sands, once a month for the last year.  He’s major news in this area.  The press calls him the Kachina Killer.  His victims have all had red hair.” 

Rafe guided Sarah back to the chair.

“It’s time for him to kill again.  I think you saw him last night.  Worse yet, it looks like he’s picked you to be number twelve.”

Sarah sank back down on the chair.  Though her mouth hung open, she could not speak.

* * *

Hours later Rafe returned to headquarters and Sarah Quinlan.  “I drove out to see Mr. Sorenson.  He verified your visit yesterday,” he said as he sat down. 

He pulled the evidence bag out of his pocket and put it on the table.  The red ribbon looked like a trail of blood under the fluorescent lights.

“What’s that?” Sarah whispered.

“It’s the killer’s favorite weapon.  All eleven victims were strangled with a length of ribbon, red like this one.”  He watched Sarah.  “I found it on the side of the road about where you stopped yesterday.”

She put her head in her hands, visibly shaking.  “He’ll find me.”  She looked up at Rafe.  “There’s no place for me to go, is there?”

“You’ll be fine with us.  We want to catch this guy.  With your assistance, we just might do that.”  He took her hand.  “I promise we’ll keep you safe.”

Sarah nodded and wiped the tears on her cheeks.  “Thank you.”

“There’s an officer guarding the door to this room.  Try to relax.  No one can get to you while you’re in the building.”  He stood.  “Is there anything you need, anything I can get for you?”

Sarah shook her head.

“Just call out if there’s a problem.”  Rafe left the room with its forlorn occupant.  He walked to Sergeant O’Hara’s desk.

“Did you learn anything from Sorenson?”

“She was there yesterday and left like she told us.  He wanted to talk more about his Earth Warriors, that group he formed, wouldn’t shut up about them.”

“How did you get away?”

Rafe grinned.  “I walked out on him.  What about you? Did you learn anything from the hotel security tape?”

  “A man got out of the elevator and left the doll in front of her door.  He wore a cap and kept his head down.  He appears to be six feet, medium build, no distinguishing features that we could see, plain denim jacket, white t-shirt, and jeans.”

Rafe’s cell phone buzzed.  “I need to take this.”  After a brief conversation, he clicked off the phone and grinned at O’Hara.  “Forensics found a GPS tracker on Miss Quinlan’s car.  I bet it was put on in the hotel lot last night.  That gives me an idea.”

* * *

The man was dressed all in black, hidden by the darkness in which he waited.  His face was covered by a black hood with only slits for eyes.  He followed the red-haired woman to a little house on Margaret Street.  Fernandez rode with her.  The detective let her into the house and moved through it to check for intruders.  The man watched from outside as Fernandez and the woman went from room to room, turning on the lights. 

When they came back to the front door, a police cruiser pulled up to the house. 

He moved into the shadows made by the garage roof, confident he was invisible in the gloom. 

“You’ll be safe here,” said the detective.  “Nobody knows about this place.  I’ll only be gone a few minutes.  Lock the door after me.”  Fernandez waited as she shut the door and locked it.  Then he got into the waiting car.

The man watched as the cruiser disappeared around the corner.  He crept around the outside again, checking the doors and windows.  In the back, a door opened when he tried it.  He glanced around and saw no one in view.  Getting in was easy despite the detective.

Slinking down the hallway, he came to the room in which he’d seen the woman, from the outside through the sheer drapes.  He could see the back of her head above a wing chair as she sat watching television. He reached into the backpack he wore and withdrew a length of ribbon.  He wrapped it around his hands and prepared to strike.

Suddenly, the overhead light turned on.  “Don’t take another step.”

Rafe stood in the doorway holding his Glock 20 on the culprit.  “Officer Mason, you can get up now.”

The red-haired police woman stood.  She held her weapon pointed at the intruder.  “Don’t move.”

The man let the ribbon fall onto the floor.  “Sarah is not here.”  The man’s voice was muffled by the hood.

“No, she isn’t.  She’s in a secure location.”  Rafe moved to the figure and ripped off the hood.

Aaron Sorenson looked back at him, a superior smile on his face, his pale eyes blinking in the light.  He did not resist while Rafe cuffed him and recited his rights. 

When they arrived at District 4 headquarters, Sorenson was taken in for interrogation.  He still had the smile on his face, as if it was all a game that he won.

Rafe sat across from his prisoner.  “Why did you follow us to the house tonight? “

Sorenson shook his head.  “Too late, Detective, you didn’t want to talk this afternoon. I don’t want to talk now.  I’d like to see my attorney, please.”

Disgusted, Rafe walked back to his office while Sorenson called his attorney. 

Sergeant O’Hara followed him.  “I printed this off the Earth Warriors’ website.  It’s their manifesto.” 

Rafe took the page and read it aloud.  “We will avenge the atrocities committed against our Mother Earth.  We will do what we must in retribution for each bomb and each missile that poisoned our beautiful Mother and left her pristine sand in piles of radioactive glass.  Atonement must be made.  The Mountain Spirits have decreed it.”

“How many tests have they made at White Sands?” asked O’Hara.

“I don’t know, over the years it could be dozens, a hundred maybe.”  He looked at O’Hara.

“How many members do they have?  We could have more than one killer.”

* * *

The dark man sat in his parked car.  He watched the hotel where the chosen woman had been brought.  In the stillness of the night, undisturbed by the sounds of nearby interstate traffic, he could wait and watch.  The black hood was on the seat beside him.  Everything else he needed was on the backseat. 

He would strike when the woman was vulnerable. If he failed, another would complete the ritual sacrifice.  The Mountain Spirits had spoken.

 

 

 

 

1 comment:

  1. Good GOD! I can't believe you're going to leave us hanging like that!

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